When I was with you,you didn’t care
you took me for granted,that wasn’t fair.
I tried to speak,you did not listen
you were misled creating distance.
I gave you hints of conspiracy around
Everyone had planned to steal my crown.
I screamed for help you ignored
I was broken,couldn’t handle it any more..
Wish you could have dared
to care,to listen,to speak..
We could have survived every critique!!
via Daily Prompt: Daring
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Very nice poem. Thank you!
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Thank you ☺☺
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Maybe hints are not working! Say it straight! By the way nyc poem! 🙂
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Yeah..hints don’t work!!
Thank you for appreciation 🙂
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beautiful……
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Thank you so much!!
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😃😃😃
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Great poem! I finally got to write a post after you nominated me for the liebster award. Here’s the link – https://thechaoticmindandmore.wordpress.com/2016/10/05/liebster-award/.
Thanks again 🙂 This means a lot!
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Awesome! 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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🙂
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Written very well. 👍🏼
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Thank you Puneet☺☺
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Welcome. ☺️
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